Sort the Rewrite Move
Distinguish plain-language improvements from edits that weaken or obscure legal effect.
Sort each edit by what it does to the legal sentence. Clarity gain Precision loss Legalese holdover Change Notice shall be provided by Vendor to Vendor must notify Customer. Split one 80-word sentence into trigger, duty, deadline, and exception bullets. Replace prior to with before while keeping the same deadline. Change must indemnify to should help with losses. Replace unless law prohibits notice with when notice seems appropriate. Delete the defined term Confidential Information and use stuff we share. Keep herein and thereto because they sound shorter than repeating the noun. Replace pursuant to with in accordance with applicable provisions…
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