Spot the buried ask
Identify a buried ask and rewrite it as a direct, warm request.
The message is polite, but the action is hard to find. Find the region most responsible for the buried ask problem. Long background before the actual request Correct. The request is buried under context. Plain-language warmth leads with what the reader should do, then explains why. Short appreciation line for Legal's help Specific appreciation can help tone. The issue is that the ask arrives too late to guide the reader. Deadline phrase attached near the end The deadline matters, but the deeper problem is placement. The ask and deadline should appear up front together. Visible requests Moved from polite fog…
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